Mock examEnglish Together · B1 Preliminary · Exam Track

Mock 1 — Writing

Both parts of the real Writing paper, in the real order and with the real clock — and with the help switched on. Each task opens with its plan, its content points and an opening you can borrow. Write with them in front of you, press Check to see the model and mark your own draft against the four criteria, then clear it and write the task once more from the blank box. Keep both drafts; the second one is the one that tells you where you are.

45 minutes2 partsPart 1 is compulsory20 marks eachSupport open from the start
Writing · Mock 1 Scaffolded 0 of 0 parts done

This is the scaffolded mock: every part opens with its support showing. Use it, check, then clear it and try the part alone — that second attempt is the one to watch.

Part 1 · Question 1

The email — you must answer this question

Read the email from your English friend Nila and the four notes you have made beside it. Then write your email to Nila, using all four notes. Write about 100 words. A note answered in one short sentence still counts; a note you never answer cannot be repaired by writing more about the others.

Read this email from your English friend Nila, and the notes you have made.

From: Nila  ·  Subject: Our podcast!

Big news — the school has said yes to our podcast idea, and Tom and I want you to be in the first episode, talking about life in your country.

We can record it online on Saturday morning or Sunday afternoon — which is better for you? We also need one topic for your part: something about your town, your school, your food, anything. And we still don't have a name for the whole podcast. Any ideas?

Write back soon!
Nila

Fantastic! — tell Nila how you feel about being in it.your note, beside line 1
Say which day is better for you, and why.your note, beside line 3
Suggest one topic for your part.your note, beside line 4
Give one idea for the name of the podcast.your note, beside line 5

Question 1  compulsory

Write your email to Nila, using all four notes. Write about 100 words.

Your answer 0 words

Mark your own against the real criteria:

  • Content. Read your draft again and physically point at the line that answers each of the four notes. Four notes, four lines — and note 2 has two halves, the day and the reason. If you cannot point at one of them, it is not there, and in this part a missing note costs more than any grammar mistake.
  • Communicative achievement. It reads like an email to a friend, not a form: a greeting (Hi Nila,), a first line that reacts to her news before it answers anything, and an ending with your name. Nothing in it would be strange to receive.
  • Organisation. More than one paragraph, and the sentences are joined rather than stacked: and, but, so, because, also. A reader can see where one idea stops and the next starts.
  • Language. The everyday words are right and there is some B1 grammar visible on the page — a comparative (better / easier), a modal (could / should), a reason with because. You have read it once more for the small things: it's not its, capital letters, full stops.
Part 2 · Question 2 or Question 3

Choose one — the article or the story

Answer one of these two questions. Write about 100 words. Both are marked out of the same 20, so a story is not worth more than an article: choose the one you can finish, and choose it in thirty seconds.

Question 2 · Article
You see this notice in your school's English magazine.

ARTICLES WANTED — THE PERFECT RAINY DAY
What do you do when it rains all day? Do you stay in or go out anyway? Alone or with other people? Tell us about your perfect rainy day — and why it is perfect. We will publish the best articles.a notice in your school's English magazine
Question 3 · Story
Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence:

When Tom opened the envelope, he could not believe what was inside.an instruction from your English teacher

Question 2 or Question 3  choose one

Write your article or your story in about 100 words. Write the number of the question you chose at the top of your answer.

Your answer 0 words

Mark your own against the real criteria:

  • Content. Article: the notice asks what you do and why it is perfect — both are answered, and the in-or-out question is answered too. Story: the given sentence is there word for word, we find out what was in the envelope, and something happens because of it.
  • Communicative achievement. You chose one voice and kept it. An article speaks to a reader — it can ask a question, it can say you. A story holds a reader — it can use direct speech, and it does not explain itself.
  • Organisation. Three short paragraphs with a shape. Article: the day → what you do → why it is perfect. Story: the envelope → what Tom does → what changed. The last line is a line you chose, not the place you ran out of words.
  • Language. Some range is on show and you took one small risk. Article: real adjectives instead of nice and good, and one conditional (if it rains…). Story: not every verb in the past simple — one was ‑ing, one had ‑ed, and a time linker (as soon as, while, after).

What this paper told you

A writing part counts as done when your draft is the right length and you can honestly tick all four criteria. The model is there to compare against, not to copy.

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—marks, best unaided attempt
0parts where you opened the support

Your second draft — written after clearing the plan — is the one to keep. If it still has all four content points and a real ending, the plan is now in your head, which is where it has to be on the day.